Let's Azonto

Put on your dancing shoe, and let's azonto, forget that girl, because she's an azontoa, but let's mimic her style

She signal an amazing intention,
with her acrobatic movement,
she place her right leg slightly in front,
she twisted on the whole leg,

can you do the zonto,

she knee she bend and move her hips,
that girl is an Azontoa,
she raise her hands up and pop her hips,
can i mimic her style?,

let do the zonto,

her finger accrossed her right wrist,
she move her right hand forward and backward
am gonna mimic her style,
let's do the zonto,

can you do the zonto?,

i call it Zonto,
she call it Azonto,
you call it Abontoa,
but i say she's an Azontoa,

i must mimic her style.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading, hope you know how to azonto.

Reviews

[Cassy Samuels]

Lol...i know that dance all right...but seriously i couldn't see any Fuse or Wizkid's Azonto o!!! but you try in your description "she move her right hand forward and backward"..well nice piece and attempt

[ayosonolowo]

Thank you very much cassy

[Izzy-01]

very detailed i could picture the whole dance im my mind . i doubt if id do the dance as well as it was described though : ) nice poem i liked it

[ayosonolowo]

Thank you.

[Marie]

I don'tknow how to do the azonto, but it sounds fascinating.

[ayosonolowo]

Yea, thank you

[kingblaq]

YOLO...let's dance! Lol

nice imagery. Fun read.

Proof read it more closely tho.
WRITE ON

[ayosonolowo]

Yea,.. Thanks alot.

[Annie S]

Lovely detailing in the poem which describes the girl that did the azonto. The way you use your descriptive words to make the whole poem come alive makes the reader see it and read it slowly to get each detail that you were talking about.
Keep writing :)

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot noble poet.res

[Annie S]

you're welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem on the azonto. Thank you for sharing this write along with the dance...:)

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot sir

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)...

[ayosonolowo]

Lol ok ^^~^`~^

[ayosonolowo]

Lol ok ^^~^`~^

[ayosonolowo]

^^~^^~^^............:p

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :).............................

[ayosonolowo]

Lol ^~^^~^^~^

[Sami Khalil]

LOl.............

[Clara]

I say, life is too short not to dance. :)

[ayosonolowo]

Really? K to what, thanks for the review.

[JenniferMarie]

Well written. I like the cadence of the poem.

"she knee she bend and move her hips,
that girl is an Azontoa,
**she raise her hands up and pop her hips,
can i mimic her style?,"

Great stanza. Great images and pulls the reader in here.

Your first stanza is great as well. I really like this poem. Thank you for sharing.

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot,........ I appreciate your review.