Friend

This was writting when i depart from a very real friend.

Thinking of the times we spent, together,

makes me feel bad seperating from other,

a friend that care,
a friend so dare,

you've been my sleet of joy,
though i take you for a toy,

how would i unravel,
the feelings full of ravel,

you've been my sleeve,
and a night time slave,

i look so wan,
fallen to wane,

i have no other way,
than to let you flow away,

oh dare friend i will always think of you,
even though you left me in a throe,

Author's Note

Thank alot

Reviews

[Marie]

THis has such a strange, melencholoy charm...I like it.

[ayosonolowo]

Thank you so much, for liking my poem

[Dhaye]

Losing a friend is a sad story...but one should move on. A true friend will never leave you...remember that.

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot, i really appreciate the review

[Cassie]

Loved the rhyming. Good one ayo

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot ma

[Clara]

It is very sad to lose a friend and I think you did well to write this.
There were a few spelling errors here and there but keep writing, and I'm sure it will become easier and easier.

I enjoyed it.

[ayosonolowo]

Thank alot lola

[Annie S]

your rhyming is simple yet love the idea that it made sense. Friendship is an amazing experience
nicely written :)

[ayosonolowo]

I really appreciate your dropping by to grace my writting, thanks alot.

[Annie S]

you're welcome :)

[Akashi]

Beautifully written, my dear friend.

[ayosonolowo]

You're welcome

[Akashi]

:D :D :D :D Thank you :D :D

[Sami Khalil]

It is disheartning when two good friends seperate for any reason for that causes some hurt and pain between the two whether they acknowledge it or not....A splendid poem...:)

[ayosonolowo]

Thank you alot

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)