Wounded heart

It was just a game am sorry

You told me you love me,
you told me you care,

you told me am the only one you love,

you told me,
you can't do without me,

but i found out,
they are all lies,

you made my mother a promise,
you never to leave me,

but you ran out in a flash,
you took our love for game,

i can never forgive you,
that all i can say.

Author's Note

Thank you

Reviews

[Lilly]

You can feel the emotion, the hurt in this.
Nice work

[ayosonolowo]

thank you.

[The dark story]

betrayal from the loved ones ..the worst spear that stabs heart ferociously.
nicely penned

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot...

[Marie]

Well, you're certainly better off without her fickly shallowness...

[ayosonolowo]

Right, thanks alot

[Cassie]

Sorry, that feels so bad, betrayal i can say. Thank you for sharing

[JenniferMarie]

Oh I can relate to this. I like that this poem is relatable. When they are relatable its moving.

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot, i really appreciat

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Honest write, but there is a typo "live" it should be leave, and I think there should be "you" example

you made my mother a promise,
never to live me,

you made a promise to my mother,
you never leave me,

All in all a good honest write.

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome always, keep writing.

[ayosonolowo]

Sure i wil

[Clara]

I agree with Marc on the few spelling errors but otherwise, a very honest write indeed.
I also think that the simplification of your emotions translates to something very 'final'. :)

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot

[Sami Khalil]

We have to be careful from the games the other side plays and it goes both ways. There should be sincerity...Another good one...:)

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)