I love you mother!!

I wrote this just for my lovely mother.

A beautifull building now stand alone,
Missing the one who build it,


Thank you mother for all,
You have done,


Thank you for the care,
And wonderfull training,


Thank you for been there,
When we have problems,


Thank you mother for we could,
Alway count on you,


Thank you for the love you showed,
To us, that no one could,


I wonder why you,
Meaningfull life, suddenly end,


I no you're saying; i love you,
In your special way,


Thank you mother, your son and doughter,
Are saying; rest in peace,


Hope now you will watch,
Us from heaven,


So as we won't go astray,
I love you mother.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I think The Prince of Darkness ; Ozzy, paints it better than me https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=COL_est2Vf0

[Stella Armour]

i read this as though you have lost your mother for which i m very sorry...

this is a lovely tribute to her.....

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot

[The dark story]

Yhis is really a beautiful dedication to your mother. We can never fully thank for her love and solictiude…her love and care are priceless. She is the one who creates a new soul in us. Loved this piece. Thanks for sharing.

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot

[Sami Khalil]

"I wonder why you,
Meaningfull life, suddenly end,


I no you're saying; i love you,
In your special way,


Thank you mother, your son and doughter,
Are saying; rest in peace,


Hope now you will watch,
Us from heaven, "
Wow. Sorry for the loss first of all. Secondly , this was a very heartfelt and sad poem and I'm pretty sure your mother is proud of you looking down from heaven...Pen on...:)

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot
i really appreciat your review

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure, sir...:)