Let the sun shine

My life life is in her hand

I saw the sun when
it is dark,
instead of the moon
and the stars,
do you have to go?
And leave my world so cold?
Make a u-turn
say no to the call
let the sun shine
at it appropriat time
my life is in your hands,
keep it in the right path.

Reviews

[prachi prangya agasti]

nice one... keep it up....

[closed]

hm, i wonder if this might be about love
not sure
but the flow is really cool
i like your penmanship

nice one

-Dream

[ayosonolowo]

Yea certainly
thanks alot

[closed]

no problem