My glory!!

Who soaked me?
Where did i pass through?
On the day of my birth,
where is the cadge?
Did she throw away the aqua?
Speak to me like an astute person,
where did my animation and anima pass through?
Who gave me the snail aqua?
Why is my life and glory crawling?
Like a snail?
Please pick me up!!!
And reveal the secret

Reviews

[closed]

oh wow
there is something about this one
maybe its the format
but this poem is true gold

awesome write

-Dream

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot palx
i must say;
your review means alot

[closed]

no problem
keep writing
ill be reviewing more

[Rogue]

This is interesting to read. It feels almost spiritual and yet mystical as well. Would it seem odd if I said almost Jungism?

Truly intrigued by this one. :)

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot
i must say
i felt delighted by your review