The road

Tempting is the road
and complecated is it
but patience could help all

Reviews

[Mina]

This reminds me of Robert frosts piem
The road not taken,

Its lovely :)
Beautiful

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot
i really appreciat your review

[Shanil Mehdi]

I love poems like these where you can find so many interpretations and the lyrics are so deep. nicely done.

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot shanil
i just feel like writing an haiku
i never knew that i will get it almost right
thanks once again

[Shanil Mehdi]

no problem, keep up the good work. :D