Superior

Superior

A Poem by ayosonolowo
"

Just for ma savior

"
I over had some one
description; and i get a
mental picture of him
but when i met him
he does not look enything
like i expected




i expected him to be a
conquerior
but i met him as a teacher
instead of raising armies
to defeat enemies





but yet he was prove
to be the savior
couse he is a superior over
all heart





but i want him
and i need him
how i wish i could see him
by my side

© 2013 ayosonolowo


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Those princes come in many guises. And it is wonderful you have been able to recognize one that may normally go unnoticed. And perhaps one day you will see him there...

I like your structuring in this. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

11 Years Ago

Yeh
right
i really like that
thank you

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ayosonolowo
ayosonolowo

Kano, Christainity, Nigeria



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My names are David Ayo Olowoeyo, a local Nigerian young writer born in Kano but originated From kogi state, and writings has been a path of me since when i was at 0 level, though i stay local and have.. more..

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