The young lady

Dedicated to my best friends girl

Young lady, oh so beautifull full of life and vibrant like the stars in the sky i saw her when browsing through the lilies i watch her lough and play i walk towards her while she smile star i saw dancing in her eyes and desire i felt through her move i need her for what she have i love her for who she is how i wish she could be mine

Author's Note

Please correct me my mistakes

Reviews

[Hotwater]

Top draw... she sounds like perfection.

*bird*

P.S. There are mistakes but I've enjoyed the read as it is... just a lack of punctuation, and "lough" is that "laugh"?... Anyway, it's a "feel good" poem, have a good day.

[Mina]

Heart felt
Real good :)
Liked it

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks


alot

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot

yes that is laugh

that was a mistake
and am gonna correct it

thanks alot

[ron]

Very nice poem. I like it.

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks




alot