Forced creativity

Forced creativity

A Poem by Ayonmann

I'm not really a poet
Don't even know a sonnet
But this is a requirement
That's in need of fulfillment

I've got no inspiration,
But a lot of determination
It's just a bit frustrating,
When there's a deadline you're chasing

This might not be poetic at all
And it might cause a downfall
But at least I've got to try
Or else I haven't got a choice but to cry

It's hard when they force you to be an artist
When you're no Rembrandt or Henri Matisse
Only to have your work be criticized 
As if you were a professional, to be precise

They make you produce an art 
and put meaning to it part by part
But what's more to that activity
Than a mere forced creativity

© 2016 Ayonmann


Author's Note

Ayonmann
This is just about one of my frustrations in school

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I liked your poetry. It was a simple AABB format but you brought out your emotions. The atmosphere throughout your poetry was tense and you felt the frustrating. I understand tenacity. I would have loved if you had used some figures of speech, but it was a really good poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ayonmann

8 Years Ago

Thank you! It's very much appreciated. I'll keep your advice in mind
Kevona Giscombe

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.



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I love the last line. Sums everything up in an poetic way; a nice bit of irony that made me smile. As for the the message of the poem, my sentiment is you are right on!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked your poetry. It was a simple AABB format but you brought out your emotions. The atmosphere throughout your poetry was tense and you felt the frustrating. I understand tenacity. I would have loved if you had used some figures of speech, but it was a really good poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ayonmann

8 Years Ago

Thank you! It's very much appreciated. I'll keep your advice in mind
Kevona Giscombe

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Added on August 28, 2016
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Ayonmann

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