Old Sorrow And Missery

Old Sorrow And Missery

A Poem by Scott

My life feels like its ending. Its just floating away, along with my dignity and my soul which is in the wind, which is being crushed in dispite. As I sit in the cold wet snow, As I ponder Amongst the ritc, How is my life ending, dying in a ditch. I wish this could all change as I cryed Like a b***h.

© 2008 Scott


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nice acrostic poem =)
i was able to capture your angst and anguish in this poem very well
along with the melancholy and depression

Posted 16 Years Ago


I have to echo the words of a few other reviewers: Nice Acrostic!

=)

~RD

Posted 16 Years Ago


Nice acrostic.

Posted 16 Years Ago


nice acrostic

Posted 17 Years Ago


A well thought out piece. best wishes, Bethlynne.

Posted 17 Years Ago


acrostic usually means bullshit.
But the message converyed here makes it quite...
clever.
well done.

Posted 17 Years Ago


I love the way you can get the message across in very few words. Very distinct, I hope that makes sense to you the way I want it. to Well done!

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on June 21, 2008

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Scott
Scott

Staten Island, NY



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I am a song writer and a poet. I play Guitar, Piano, Bass, Trumpet, Drums and I Sing. I LOVE romance, As i am romantic. My songs are usually about love, etc. Well, im gunna go, Muah! more..

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