Holidays

Holidays

A Chapter by Aynsley

When Hamish finally arrived, Eva was dressed in a beautiful silk dress.

"My, you look astonishing!" Gasped Hamish.

"Thank you." She said breathlessly, bringing Hamish closer to her.

"I love you-" She started.

"I love you more!" He mocked. He placed his hands on her hips, and closed the space between them. They were so close that Eva could feel his warm breath on her skin.

"What do you want to do today?" Asked Hamish, tucking a strand of hair away from her face.

"Let's go on a date!" She smiled cheesily at him.

 "Ofcourse! Why not?" He picked Eva up and threw her over his shoulder.

"Hey!" She squealed, hitting him lightly on the back. "Put me down!" She giggled.

Hamish did as he was told, and instead intwined their fingers together as they walked down to the resturaunt.

"What would you like to eat?" Asked Hamish.

"What ever you're going to have." She laughed. "I don't really mind." She said feeling giddy.

"Okie dokie." He smiled, putting an arm around her waist as he ordered at the bar.

"Here's you're number, go find a table, and we will bring you you're dishes." The barman grinned.

Eva basictly lead Hamish to the perfect seat, right in the corner, with romantic lit candles.

"This spot is perfect." She smiled, plopping down on one of the seats.

"Just like you." Responded Hamish. This made Eva feel shy and her cheeks began to flush.

"Aww.." She giggled.

Finally the meals arrived. Their mouths watering with excitment..

"Mm, this meatloaf is delicious." Hamish grinned.

"Just like you." She teased, biting his lip softly.

"Do you want to stay at my place tonight?" He asked, looking into her eyes ever so sweetly.

"Hehe, ofcourse." She smiled, blushing at the same time.

After dinner they caught the taxi to his house.

"Wow, this is the first time I've been in here!" She laughed, astonished.

"Well, not really.. you were here last time."

"Wait, no.. I don't think I have been here..have I?

"Yes, but you were knocked out, from drinking to much." Hamish laughed. "But that was ages ago, before we went out."

"Oh, well. I guess that sounds like me." She lied, trying to act cool.

"Exactly like you..." He smiled, pulling her closer to him.

He placed his lips upon hers, kissing her sweetly, full of passion. Eva smiled against his lips, and pulled away.

"I love you so much Hamish, I really do." She smiled touching his lips.

"And I love you too my dear." He grinned, but sighed. "If only I could live with you forever...-"



© 2010 Aynsley


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haha, a romantic chapter!
yeh, it is a bit odd that they havent dated yet...and i remember from the first chpter they've been together for four years?
so if they're 16...they met when they were 12...? >.>
lol
still a good story
hehe, wonder what happens nxt
onto the nxt chapter....--->

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thank you guys for your reviews, even if some arn't good :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great dialogue, interesting. I love when there's a great romance in stories. Try not to rush them into anything though. People love a long... wait! Hehe.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha yeaah, romance :) *sings* So sweet.
Are they gonna do it? JOKESS lol. i like this chapter.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww romance is in there airr... I love itt ;)
Sad last sentence though :/

Posted 14 Years Ago


NO ONE TOLLD ME THIS WAS UP. Oh well, lol, this was a great chapter. Tons of great dialogue but we could always use a ton more of detail ;) So far you're doing great building the relationship between Hamish and Eva. It's cute, maybe the next chapter will be spiced up. Lol kidding. Going on to read now.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha yes Lauren, they haven't even been on a date. How odd? And they're married. Yeah, I agree, confusing, but this is how the story goes, so stick with it. Haha! Anyway, yeah. Thanks for the good rating!

Posted 14 Years Ago


haha! few mistakes...their on ther first date AFTER they decide to get married? confused... :D lol 70 from me!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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