Experiment

Experiment

A Chapter by Aynsley

Their experiment bubbling in the sun.

"How odd." Said Eva.

"Yeah, it is." Confused, Hamish replied. He gently picked up the test tube of liquid. "It seems different then it was before, it's now Red." He replied. Eva got closer and took a look.

"Well, yes it is." She laughed. "But what the heck, we might as well test if it works." She smiled.

" But we don't know what it does." Hamish glanced at her.

" I guess we will never know until we try." She said. Hamish took the lid off the tube and sipped some. It tasted very strong, like vodka infact.

"Take a sip Eva, it tastes really wierd." Hamish chuckled.

"Ooh, yes it does.. like a spirit or something." She said, taking another gulp full.

" Is this even safe?" Hamish questioned.

" Let me see.." Eva took out the sheet of paper, and down the bottom, it had inprinted on it 'Safe to drink.'

"Looks like it to me." She smirked, taking another swig. "Do you wan't some more?"

"I don't know.." Hamish stuttered. "Maybe we should pack up now, everyone else is finished."

"Okay." Eva laughed, screwing the lid back onto the tube, only a little of the red liquid was left.

The next day Eva awoke from her bed, feeling excited and hyped for the holidays.

She grabbed her phone and dialed Hamish.

-Hey Hamish!-

-Woah, you're up early Eva, why'd you call hun?-

-Well, I was wondering if you wanted to hangout today, I'm bored.-

-Ofcourse darling, I'll be right over. Just let me get dressed-

 

 

 



© 2010 Aynsley


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lol, just drink it...xP
haha, this chapter was short but amusing
wondering wat happens nxt...and i think first line doesnt make sense...?
good chapter
AND onto the nxt chap.
hehe, and i rememberd to put rating this time : 97

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lol, KeSha is such a copy of Ke$ha... but lol idcc :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Agreeing with KeSha, yes you are so annoyingly talented. You are a really great writer, and it's hard to believe you're thirteen. Have you talked to a publisher? I'm sure they would love to publish your book!

Posted 14 Years Ago


can you review some of my stuff once iv done somethingLOL?
thank u
nice work again!! ur so annoying talented...

Posted 14 Years Ago


:O This is soo short omg, grr.. annoying
okayy next chapteer

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ha! And so it is, maybe Hamish is half immortal. Who knows, not me cause there is no more. Well, I am going to say that this chapter made me laugh because they automatically tasted it before making sure it was safe lol. Was it now suppose to me acne stuff? That's funny, your characters make me laugh! Can't wait for more dood! Be sure and let me know when there is more up!

It was a pleasure,

XWayOathX

Posted 14 Years Ago


haha that was a bit of a rip off~oh well :) it was quite good! a 65 from me!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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