Immortality

The next day I got up early to get to school. We had an assignment due, and I had bearly started.

I had never really took an interest in Science, but til this day I have decided that grades do matter!

Ever since Hamish asked for my hand in marriage, I have been eagerly happy.

I walked into the Science Lab, with a wide grin spread across my face, I walked down the row until I found a seat right next to Hamish.

"Hey." I giggled. I slumped down onto the stall and smiled at him. "Wanna be my partner for the experiment?" I laughed, knowing the answer would be yes.

"Yes," He agreed, taking a strand of hair from my face and tucking it behind my ear.

"You are truly beautiful Eva my dear." He said, pressing his lips to mine.

"Thanks." I blushed, taking out my books for this lesson.

Mrs. Dumbalee trotted into the classroom, right on time, with a miscevious smirk on her face.

"Good morning, ladies and gentlemen." She proposed, as if she was going to make an important speech.

"Good morning." The class greeted her like always.

"Today we are going to be doing an experiment on make-up, we are going to be trying to make a liquid state of matter, that can be used on peoples faces, to get rid of blemishes. Any questions?"

"Can we get started?" Joked Hamish.

"Ah, yes, indeed. Get to work!" She puffed, taking out a mirror to look at herself.

Since when has she been so vain? I thought.

My eyes darted from the end of the room to the front, seeing people doing work. I had no idea what to do, so I decided to start from using an old recipe. I took out a sheet of old, crumpled paper with instructions on it. Cleary written it said;

Ingredients: 1 pint of lemon juice, 2g 's of fish oil, 10 specs of sugar, 1 hint of dandy-lion juice, and uceliptus leaf oil.

Step 1: Take the pint of lemon juice, and soak it in the fish oil. Stir for a minute, then add 5 specs of sugar, and add the dandy-lion juice, then the other 5 specs of sugar, and then the uceliptus leaf oil.

Step 2: Stir all the ingredients together, and leave out in the sun to simmer for an hour, come back and wala!

Eva did as the paper told her to do, without thinking that it never stated what it were to create.

She mixed everything together, stirred it all up, until it made a foamy mixture, she then set it outside as it said.

" Okay, well.. let's see what this creates." She said, nudging Hamish.

"Ha, well, it never said, so.." He laughed.

" Yeah, I think I know what it will make, my grandmother told me when I was just a baby, but I can't seem to remember, she said it was important though, and not to loose it, so I thought, might as well give it a go."

"That's the spirit!" He laughed.

An hour later Hamish and Eva, went to collect their experiment, to find..

 

Reviews

[Aynsley]

Haha rain, I don't really know if I spelt it right to be honest :/

[Rain]

interesting chapter
hehe, i agree with Laur3n on what it is...
good use of a cliffhanger
and is that how you spell 'eucalyptus'? or is it supposed to be like that?

[Aynsley]

Yes another, get used to it >:P

[FairyTalePrincess]

Another cliff hanger I see? Unfair, very unfair, that's two times in a row. Haha. Okay, let's go see what the suprise is! :)

[KeSha]

Grr cliff hanger much?? OMG whattt? lol :D
i like the way you use short sentences to get the reader attached to the story.
its very good

[Dorryy]

Lol, this is halarious.
"Is it safe?"
haha they ask after they drank it.. ooops ;)
nice chapter.

[WayOath]

DA DA DA! Suspense. I hate it. No, just kidding, I love it. I have to agree with La3uren that it might be immortalitiy juice. Maybe the story is taking a step back in time here to show us what happened before the big decision, I could be wrong. But Im gonna read and find out. This is really good so far. lol, I love the dots at the end. It haunts me! I must know.

[La3uren]

just a tip, with the immortal juice, dont tell ppl the recipie! its more mysterious !!!

[La3uren]

:O more more more!!! love the cliffhanger!!! aside a few mistakes, thats a definite 95 from me!!