The Box

After the game, Hamish jogged over to meet me. "We won!" He cheered. Grabbing me and spinning me around.

" I can see" I laughed, smiling up at him. I gave him a peck on the cheek. "But are you forgetting something?"  I erged. He thought for a moment. Then placed his hand in his pocket, then slowely took it out to reveal a lovely wooden box.

"What's in it?" I glanced. He shook his head.

"It's a suprise, take a look for yourself!" He carefully placed the box in my hand. I was so excited to see what he had got me this time, he loved giving me gifts, one time he gave me a pearl necklace worth about $1,000. That was the happiest day of my life. I traced the curves of the box with my fingers, feeling the texture of the wood, and the engravements on it.

Finally I opened it up and inside lying on sheer white silk was a golden ring, decorated with crystals of all sorts. At this point in time, Hamish kneeled down on his knee and smiled.

"Will you marry me Eva?" His eyes glistening, and his grin white and wide.

"Ofcourse Hamish!" I gaped, looking at the ring. Hamish then took the ring from the box and slid it onto my finger. It fitted perfectly. "It's lovely." I sniffed, tears of joys forming in my eyes.

He placed his hand on my cheek, and leaned closer and kissed my lips softly. His kiss was so romantic and I didn't want to ever let go of him. I put my arms around his neck and kissed him back fully.

I couldn't believe I had just agreed to marry him, we were only 16, but I love him so much, I don't care how long it will take until we can get married. For now, he is 100% mine, and I love him.

I put a finger to his lips and leaned closer to whisper to him. "I love you." I smiled, wrapping my arms around his waist. His scent filled the space around us, he smelt of pepperment and lilly. It was the best smell ever.

"I love you too." He replied back, over joyed. I pulled further away so I could see his face. I took his whole look in. His hair, his beautiful sparkling eyes, his full lips. He was perfect, he was handsome and he was devilishly sexy. I smiled at the thought.

"Lets go somewhere." I laughed, dragging him along with me.

"Where?"

"It's a suprise." I teased.

Reviews

[Rain]

a short, but still a strong and captivating chapter
lol, wasn't expecting then to be married, so that convinced me to read on further
just a suggestion, maybe after he says "will you marry me" add a bit more detail xP
hehe, just a suggestion...hehe wondering what they gonna do...xP
lol...so theres a rating thing...so THATS what it's used for... :D
hehe, then i give a rating of 96

[Aynsley]

Lol, I don't try to.. it just comes naturally.

[FairyTalePrincess]

Haha, you always do this Aynsley! You always leave us wanting to no more of the story. You always use cliff hangers. You naughty girl! I'm entertained by this chapter, I love suprises, so reading on!

[KeSha]

Yaah i like this
:) onto the next 1

[Dorryy]

This is getting interesting.
Where are they going? :I I want to knoww!
Haha next chapter timee!

[WayOath]

It's a surprise as in they're gonna go somewhere and do it. Lol, maybe, my dream might come true. This is so romantic and cute, them two. That was sweet of him, all hot and sweaty after a game to propose lol. Moving on.

[La3uren]

Hmmm...interesting chapter. You created a nice moment there. You could be more disctiptive on the ring. Heres a rating of 60! that was really good! on to the next chapter!