Drunken Anger

written very sloppily on a napkin at an ungodly hour of the morning

The ebb and flow that no- one knows

THAT INNER BEAST MUST BE RELEASED

but god knows I wont show my teeth

to any unsuspecting innocent.

That's good isn't it?

Do we all have that rage, like we're locked in a cage, like we have something to say but nobody to listen?

Arrogant people I just wanna shove my fist in.

This fury shakes me, makes me tremble, how can people be so judgemental?

I wanna burn down the walls of your temple. Watch it , let it, smile as it crumbles.

You mindless faith will be diss-assembled.

Have you ever wanted to torch a playground?

Hit someone so hard they stay down?

Grind my teeth and stomp around, the only way I can get it out.

This anger fleeting, I sit down on the ground.

It hardly ever comes around, then I feel bad for breaking s**t, like I'm the only one who deals with it.

I'm a little child who got caught, wearing mommys diamond necklace.

Don't even want to get out of bed to make breakfast

the guilt lies there beside me like a bad houseguest

the feeling builds like an annoying crescendo

it only ends when I end it though

Apologize and take the rap, but back the fumes that busted from the cap

resenment's such a fun little chap, but only when you're sober.

Author's Note

"ignore grammar problems"

Reviews

[Bear]

Ungodly hours of the morn... sometimes the perfect time to pen one's thoughts upon a napkin!! This is very good; reminds me of myself years ago.
Thanks for posting and taking me back to my past.
Sallie Bear

[John Harden]

Wow, I really liked this. The imagery is very detailed. I have an image in my head after every line.
The imagery keeps you into it. It makes you want to keep reading. the line "the feeling builds like an annoying crescendo" is awesome lol. There's a lot I like about this piece. NIce job.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Whoa!!!! You're a little rhyme monster!!!! I'm totally shocked! You're like a hidden MC hiding behind the cute little picture! You have great technique bouncing in and out with "double word scores"!

"....to any unsuspecting innocent.
That's good isn't it?
Do we all have that rage, like we're locked in a cage, like we have something to say but nobody to listen?
Arrogant people I just wanna shove my fist in...."

Wow!! Very, very nice write!!

[Shayn00n]

I really like this.
It's written very well!
I definitely can relate