Love and Comittment

An ode to a love

I am losing you today.

I will pour all of my words into a net and hope that they would catch you.

Kiss me with that sweet embrace and these poisoned lips you'll taste

The heartbeat still flutters but the pureness died a while ago

And no more shall my tongue lick blackness onto your sweet blue eyes

My golden boy of blonde and blue

Nothing in this life could show how much I feel for you

I love you.

Unconditionally, with no fake fervor or flare, with no sly smile or quick wink, with every good and great intention, with every inch of all I have or could ever possess to offer to you, every thron and petal of mine shall be yours to flow as ink acrost your skin, locking you into the deepest of hugs to have and drink of my love until you are full.

I give myself to you.

Keep me.

Reviews

[perfectlymetiKulous]

Expressively poignant, and beautifully worded...
this was a masterpiece, and I'm so fortunate that I happened to come across it.
Can't wait to read more of your work.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Gorgeous! This is one of the better love poems that I've read recently! I love the metaphors! They were beautiful! I marvel at your talent here!

"I love you.
Unconditionally, with no fake fervor or flare, with no sly smile or quick wink, with every good and great intention, with every inch of all I have or could ever possess to offer to you, every thron and petal of mine shall be yours to flow as ink acrost your skin, locking you into the deepest of hugs to have and drink of my love until you are full."

Perfect.......

[Matthew Webb]

Ferver..hehe..

That moment aside....i enjoyed this very much.....feels like it's very much from the heart and not forced like some people tend to do just to make a love poem.

[Pax Analog]

The ebb and flow of this poem is poignant, from the poison of failed symbiosis to the nectar of resurrected yearning in a heartbeat.

One doesn't often see this kind of reversal mid-stream, and it allows the reader a glimpse into the quicksilver nature of a loving woman's feelings.

Thank you for this insight and for your lovely elegiac poem.