Was that All a dream...........?

Most of the times i find thoughts and feeling in a questionable way. I WRITE free of formalities of rules sometimes.do you think love can follow fixed rules? i don't think so.hope you would like this

Was that all a dream?

All the beautiful moments I spent with you,
are the most memorable part of my life.
your presence,
your touch, your smile,
your beauty in every way,
is the only reason I exist.

how can this illusion of your absence,
what they call reality
stand against those eternal moments ?

Even if the irresistible flow of present and future 
makes me think for a moment,
was that all a dream ?

Your love whispers inside my heart,
"even if it was a dream,
it is worthier than the reality of heavens.

My beloved, it is through the few moments of love,
the eternity unfolds itself.

Reviews

[DemitriJ]

Simply beautiful. It seems to be the perfect dream, even in reality. Those who have these are truely blessed as all mine seems to end to abruptly. Not many find love and are able to keep it, even in memory. The truth of living in the good moments you have in life. I love it.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thank you so very much for your inspiring words..i truly appreciate it dear..stay blessed.

[Rhea752]

amazing!! your writing is exquisite looking forward to more

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear,well sorry for thanking late.i am back now hope to keep sharing much more now.

[Barbara Walker]

Your words are on no way enigmatic in this poem. Your description of that dream-like state is accurate. I like the way you expressed that if it is a dream, you prefer that to reality. Good write!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Pikachu]

This is beautiful.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thank you.

[BikerAngie]

I am so impressed i look forwards to reading more of your work. It is so refreshing from the dark poetry I write the love shines though,
BikerAngie

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.my pleasure. your work must be great,i will look forward to go through it soon. I am back here now.

[Cathy Wattam]

Love is so often dream-like. This nicely expressed poem is written with true emotion and I enjoyed reading it.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[zero binty]

For the first poem RR'ed by you, I truly enjoy it. Using your words to convey an image, a feeling, it is well appreciated.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Patrick B]

I love this... it sounds so wistful and like you put deep thought into it. Nice job!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear

[J. J. Nightingale]

Beautiful dreamer,
Queen of my song
List' while I woo thee
With soft melody

Gone are the cares of
Life's busy throng
Beautiful dreamer
Awake unto me
Beautiful dreamer,
Awake unto me ..

YOUR BEAUTIFUL WORD REMIND ME OF THIS OLD SONG ..
WELL DONE .. JAZZY

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

My pleasure,thanks for sharing this lovely song here . you have really inspired me dear.

[J. J. Nightingale]

:).............

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

and sorry for late response. stay blessed always dear.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Thank you ..

[MOON]

Life often takes on a dreamlike quality . When its love you can get high on it . Your last line eternity unfolds itself sticks in the mind.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.