Was that All a dream...........?

Most of the times i find thoughts and feeling in a questionable way. I WRITE free of formalities of rules sometimes.do you think love can follow fixed rules? i don't think so.hope you would like this

Was that all a dream?

All the beautiful moments I spent with you,
are the most memorable part of my life.
your presence,
your touch, your smile,
your beauty in every way,
is the only reason I exist.

how can this illusion of your absence,
what they call reality
stand against those eternal moments ?

Even if the irresistible flow of present and future 
makes me think for a moment,
was that all a dream ?

Your love whispers inside my heart,
"even if it was a dream,
it is worthier than the reality of heavens.

My beloved, it is through the few moments of love,
the eternity unfolds itself.

Reviews

[DemitriJ]

Simply beautiful. It seems to be the perfect dream, even in reality. Those who have these are truely blessed as all mine seems to end to abruptly. Not many find love and are able to keep it, even in memory. The truth of living in the good moments you have in life. I love it.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thank you so very much for your inspiring words..i truly appreciate it dear..stay blessed.

[Aka_Kitsune]

beautiful, the only word that comes to my mind, that was wonderful, great write and keep up the good work

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear. you have really inspired me.

[Michael G.]

True love will take one to heights extraordinary. Good piece, Doctor.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear,and sorry for thanking late ,as it is never too late !

[Michael G.]

Never too late. It gave me the opportunity to re-read this lovely piece.

[Marie]

This is beautiful...that such a dream could be worthier than reality...and so unfolds itself in eternity...

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Who Cares]

This was beautiful, inspiring, and relaxing. Your flow in unreal and a deep passionate love runs through the veins of this poem...Nice work

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[L. Edward Neale]

Wow! that was sublimely moving. I felt a serene joy while I was reading this. It has quite a Zen feeling to it.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear..i am glad you enjoyed reading it.

[Southern Cross]

Your words are like fine wine..tasteful and exotic. Such graceful flow to the rhythm. I have shared these same emotions and can feel your heart speak to me. "even if it was a dream, it is worthier than the reality of heavens" Intense is all I can say.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks for finding the what i feel is deeply treasured there in words.

[Luciole]

This was a really cute love poem. I loved its question and the fact that I could relate to it made it even better :)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

The only thing that bothers me, and I mean no harm when I say this...commas as periods. I just don't see the reason for substituting one for the other when it comes to writing.


Very beautifully written and touching write. A poetic and loving piece.

~Anna Rose
100/100

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear,what bothers you is no more there now. i appreciate your genuine concern in your reviews .

[Aella.lives]

Good poem.. I like how you would prefer this 'dream' then to the 'reality of heavens'. :)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.