Was that All a dream...........?

Most of the times i find thoughts and feeling in a questionable way. I WRITE free of formalities of rules sometimes.do you think love can follow fixed rules? i don't think so.hope you would like this

Was that all a dream?

All the beautiful moments I spent with you,
are the most memorable part of my life.
your presence,
your touch, your smile,
your beauty in every way,
is the only reason I exist.

how can this illusion of your absence,
what they call reality
stand against those eternal moments ?

Even if the irresistible flow of present and future 
makes me think for a moment,
was that all a dream ?

Your love whispers inside my heart,
"even if it was a dream,
it is worthier than the reality of heavens.

My beloved, it is through the few moments of love,
the eternity unfolds itself.

Reviews

[DemitriJ]

Simply beautiful. It seems to be the perfect dream, even in reality. Those who have these are truely blessed as all mine seems to end to abruptly. Not many find love and are able to keep it, even in memory. The truth of living in the good moments you have in life. I love it.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thank you so very much for your inspiring words..i truly appreciate it dear..stay blessed.

[Perfect Mistake]

Beautifully written :) Great work very descriptive and detailed.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks,sorry for thanking late though.

[Cassie Fraga]

can really feel the emotion in this write!! well done indeed!!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Rae Emeral]

Very nice piece. :) I love it!
~Rae

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thank you. i am glad you love this.

[Krista Weiss]

Loved it!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Nobody.]

Lovely.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear

[mariah]

wow, very powerful poem that is full of meaning. great work, you have really outdone yourself!
-mariah

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear, i appreciate your reviews.

[s.r.knight]

Both ethereal and emotional. This is a beautiful piece.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[Angelic Surrender]

I can relate with this. Good work. Who really knows what is dream, and what is reality? If reality even exists, anyway. Nice work :)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thank you ,i am glad it touched you in that way .

[GirlWithAHeart.]

You are such a great, powerful writer! I loved it.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear.

[StruckByLightning]

A really good poem, I really liked the rhythm and the meaning of the poem, but I don't get why you used the row of commas??

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear,row of commas is no more there.