Gratitude

i have expressed the gratitude symbolically here,yes life is full of symbols,and all the symbols tell us how to live it.

learn from birds, the beauty of life.
they fly high up in the sky,
but they don't forget about
the trees down on the earth,
where they finally return to rest.

when you achieve the heights in your life
love them like birds.
likewise if you ever fall downwards,
fall like the drops of rain,
which fall bringing with them,
the hope of prosperity.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and positive words in this poem. Your words remind me of the Native American belief in the combination of nature and human happiness. Need both to create a good place to live. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[The White Wolf]

Love it! So very true. I always like to use birds in my poems, they carry such great meaning :)

[Kes]

This is great. :)
I really like this. It's got a good feel and flow to it, and I like the message. Keep up the great work!
Kes

[koty bell]

wow i love poetry and this is a perfect example on what great poetry is nice work:))

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

Ver well written, and easy to comprehend. Great point behind this.

[MOON]

Like how you use the birds free as they are they still return to nest.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Very nice, Ayaz! I especially liked this part:

likewise if you ever fall downwards,
fall like the drops of rain,,
which fall bringing with them,
the hope of prosperity............!!!

Thank You!

[PaperLife]

This is very positive and true. A wise outlook to have on life and feeling. And the pleasent calm is present very much in your poem. In a way I could call this very philisophical. Well done. :)

[Maryam]

This is a beautiful and sincere poem. Good job!