Gratitude

i have expressed the gratitude symbolically here,yes life is full of symbols,and all the symbols tell us how to live it.

learn from birds, the beauty of life.
they fly high up in the sky,
but they don't forget about
the trees down on the earth,
where they finally return to rest.

when you achieve the heights in your life
love them like birds.
likewise if you ever fall downwards,
fall like the drops of rain,
which fall bringing with them,
the hope of prosperity.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and positive words in this poem. Your words remind me of the Native American belief in the combination of nature and human happiness. Need both to create a good place to live. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Leo]

Very thoughtful, energetic, and inspiring..honestly it was an absolute beauty of a read..magnificent!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks for the review dear.

[Zoya Sahai]

So very true.. The symbolism you've created with birds and rain drops is lovely and so very true. I really enjoyed this one.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

My pleasure...thanks for your inspiring words dear Zoya.

[BLACK PRINCE]

Nice and well written imageries
with a deep, truthful and positive message.
I your concept I see humility in gratitude
and the importance of being down to earth
and always keeping true to our essence.

WELL DONE!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks for sharing your precious views dear dear.

[Krithika Raghavan]

This reminds me of a certain beautiful poem I had read a few years ago. Serene, makes me want to fly with birds, giving me enormous inspiration, at the same time just ink on paper, silently giving messages in the breeze;-)

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks for sharing your views dear.

[lee von cleef]

silence acts out beauty in mornings rise and evenings exhaling breath.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

thanks dear

[Kuhr Gred]

:) well done! i love this poem... talks about nature :)

[Geraldine]

So good. ^^ great write.

[Aravind]

Wonderful read.. Done it once again!! Keep up this good work!

[Nath]

Lovely poem, a very positive note.
I love the metaphors, and how even rain is presented positively.
It's a very nice message, to appreciate everything and see something positive in anything - I agree that everything has a good side.