Oh my heart have you ever realized,,,,?

this is just a poetic expression of my feelings and experiences I counter in my life under the shadow of love.

Oh my heart 

have you ever realized ?

when you sing freely

and freedom listens..

when you fall in love,

and love rises..

when you speak of silence ,

and silence speaks..

Oh my heart ,
have you ever realized ?

whenever you bring stillness in life,
and life dances....................!!!

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

The heart always has a tendency to speak all the time throughout our lives in everything that we go through. We should always listen and hear what it has to say, sometimes bringing us to a new chapter of life. Beautifully expressed write. Nicely done!

[mariah]

very interesting write! i love the little comparisons :)
-mariah

[Geraldine]

simple yet beautiful. :D nicely written.

[Rae Emeral]

This is a very intriguing poem. I like it! It was easy to read, but deep. :) Nice job!
~Rae Emeral

[SheActsLikeSummer]

This is really nice, beautiful even. Well done. And I apologize for the use of the word nice. Tsk, tsk.

[Marie]

Hearts beat without realizing all that life means...

[L. Edward Neale]

I dig that line "when you speak of silence and silence speaks." After it I found myself in a long pause just drinking in the delicious silence. Great stuff: really uplifiting and meditative.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

@Aaron,i really don't know since when my writings have been including these commos,not only as commos but more as unexpressed feelings. thses are not commos these are feeling which can not be expressed by any words.wish i could tell you how deeply lost i feel in between those commos of my writings,it is an artistic stage of writing..i have be taken by it without knowing,many of friends ask,but honestly speaking to me these are my unspoken feelings .love and blessings to all of you lovely freinds.

[Aravind]

Wonderful! Simple piece, yet filled with immense emotion. I really liked your echo.

Being obsessed with commas, I must ask what is the reason behind the multiple commas?

[Roe]

lovely write....

[Sleeping Maiden]

Ha ha, you remind me of Romeo.. hehee...

I love this piece! And the heart is just overwhelming at times huh? It goes on its own and makes its own choices making your mind go crazy. lol..

But sometimes the heart is more truthful than the mind.. so listen to your heart if you feel you must. =)

Beautiful work!