Oh my heart  have you ever realized,,,,?

Oh my heart have you ever realized,,,,?

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
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this is just a poetic expression of my feelings and experiences I counter in my life under the shadow of love.

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Oh my heart 
have you ever realized ?

when you sing freely
and freedom listens..

when you fall in love,
and love rises..

when you speak of silence ,
and silence speaks..

Oh my heart ,
have you ever realized ?

whenever you bring stillness in life,
and life dances....................!!!

© 2013 Dr Ayaz chandio


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The heart always has a tendency to speak all the time throughout our lives in everything that we go through. We should always listen and hear what it has to say, sometimes bringing us to a new chapter of life. Beautifully expressed write. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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People underestimate the heart's very own emotion, intuition as well :)
This is wonderful love, when the heart is pulsating with life, it can bring unlimited experiences...xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A really beautiful poem...This poem is overflowing with passion and love. great work!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful(: nicely done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The heart always has a tendency to speak all the time throughout our lives in everything that we go through. We should always listen and hear what it has to say, sometimes bringing us to a new chapter of life. Beautifully expressed write. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice. I like the oxymoronic line at the end "...stillness in life and life dances..."

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The beauty of falling in love. nicely done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The commas are confusing. Should they be periods?
Other than that I quite enjoyed this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice :) There is much the heart does not realize. Sometime it's a good thing. And sometimes it's not so good. Looks like you poem talks about the good things. Great work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great love poem that asks a person, do you trust your own heart?

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Dr Ayaz chandio
Dr Ayaz chandio

Karachi,Sindh.



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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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