Insomniac

Just as i feel in the nights enlightened by the light of love....

let us suppose that
the countless stars 
sparkling all the night long 
were once insomniac lovers
like you and me,

Let us suppose that 
we are stars too
longing all the night endlessly
in the infinite sky of love !

Reviews

[Dominique]

What a beautiful poem. It's short but it invokes the late night pondering that can often come to an insomniac. It was absolutely wonderful to read.

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe more star on earth than in the sky if your words were true. I liked the poem a lot. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

This is so tender and loving. Suppose we were stars...great lines

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks dear.. lots of love!

[VennelaMargame]

We're all just particles of some much larger entity, let us all shine our light while we can.

Very sweet sentiment.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Rightly said, Thanks for the review dear. stay blessed.

[Leslie Philibert]

a fine poem that breathes life into a well known scenario...great !

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks for your time and review dear.

[Najam Us Saher]

Very thoughtful and creative. I liked it.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks dear Najam us Saher for your time and the review.

[Najam Us Saher]

you're welcome ☺