"A night is not only about a night"

about one of a sleepless nights of life...in a sleepless universe of my being !

A Night is not only about
the darkness in the sky
the brightness of the stars,
the world that has fallen asleep,
but a night is also about
the untold tale of silent lips,
aching hearts,longing eyes,
it's about the journey of love,
loneliness and memories
a night is not only about a night,
a night is about the life
that is lived ages in a night !

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

but a night is also about
the untold tale of silent lips,
aching hearts,longing eyes,
it's about the journey of love,
loneliness and memories
a night is not only about a night,
a night is about the life
that is lived ages in a night !
I loved these lines. Very true and relatable poem.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks you so much, it's my pleasure that what i have wanted express and put in words have delivered the essence .

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes.......you're welcome

[Ahmad Cox]

There are a lot of great metaphors that I like in this one.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks dear Ahmad .

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like the flow of the words, it also brings a pretty picture of nighttime to my mind. It is true that there are some that go and do things during the night, it's not just a time to sleep, depending who you are.

Good Job

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks for the review dear.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

^^ You're welcome

[www]

Love the title. I enjoyed reading, good job.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your logic.
"a night is about the life
that is lived ages in a night !"
I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the very good closure. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks for your kind and motivating words dear Coyote ,it's my pleasure.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed where can we find this rare creature well done good read

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks for the review dear.

[Leslie Philibert]

Well put together, well balanced, and a fine central image !

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks for the review dear Leslie philibert.

[Valentine]

Or perhaps the night is about someone that has never lived in the light but always in darkness. These people have never lived. Nice poem, I enjoyed the meaning in this write. Valentine

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks dear Valentine,it's nice to hear from you. i have been very absent here to give time to my friends lovely reading,but now i am looking forward to enjoy all the beautiful pieces from you and many other friends as well. thanks.

[Falling Leaf.]

Simple yet straightforward. It's true; night is a closed book, a lot hidden beneath the cover, a lot to be discovered. That is why I wake up with the moon. Smashing piece. Thank you for sharing.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

Thanks for the review. i appreciate your words dear.

[Falling Leaf.]

No trouble at all.