One love One Life.

One love One Life.

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio

As the dewdrops are poured 
onto the leaves of trees,
how sweetly do birds sing 
the everlasting melody of life.

As the sunlight reaches 
the core of plants,
how wonderfully do flowers unfold
the beautiful miracles of life. 

As the fragrance of flowers
touches the soul of butterflies ,
how meaningfully do butterflies reflect
the ethereal image of life.

And as the beautiful memories
of beloved shine within my heart,
how lovingly do my heartbeats reveal
the very meaning of life.

© 2013 Dr Ayaz chandio


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Your poem is well constructed and it flows smoothly.
A good read. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks dear.
ooo very nice... all the emphasis is on "life"....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks dear.
very lovely. sounds like something coming from someone in the throes of euphoria to be aware of all the small details.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks for stopping by and sharing your views dear.
Reads like a chant of life & love..I like how it embraces the dewdrops on leaves..birds, plants and finally down to man...encompasses all of nature..just like Love.. Sweetly done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks for sharing your precious views dear.
Renée

11 Years Ago

My pleasure
Nice. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

xD sorry..."you are most welcome"...in Swedish ;-)
Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

same here,thanks. hope you didn't mind for asking that.
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

no worries ;-)
Is that first quotation mark supposed to be there?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

No it's not dear,thanks.
Very beautiful indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

thanks dear..love and blessings.
Well Written.I did notice in the 2nd line a double "of" - purposeful?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Constance Payne

11 Years Ago

I know when I write I often skip thought. I appreciate when some one let's me know. If is Beautiful... read more
Constance Payne

11 Years Ago

* it
Dr Ayaz chandio

11 Years Ago

yes it is very pleasing when someone lets us know what we as well as many others don't come to notic.. read more

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Dr Ayaz chandio
Dr Ayaz chandio

Karachi,Sindh.



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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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