As the dewdrops are poured onto the leaves of trees, how sweetly do birds sing the everlasting melody of life.
As the sunlight reaches the core of plants, how wonderfully do flowers unfold the beautiful miracles of life. As the fragrance of flowers touches the soul of butterflies , how meaningfully do butterflies reflect the ethereal image of life.
And as the beautiful memories of beloved shine within my heart, how lovingly do my heartbeats reveal the very meaning of life.
I find this to be a bit sporadic. You go from trees to bird to sunlight to flower to butterflies, but that works for this piece. It's like wind, lol.
Ah, a nature inspired piece and a reflective tone brings about a calm mood. I find the flow of the first stanza really easy and sweet. How true it is that the natural things reflect that of the supernatural. The little things people miss are sometimes the greatest works of art.
It may be small, but I love how you say, "the." It makes a difference because it inspires me to believe that all of this is connected and meant to be in place, ya know.
How thought provoking.
Thanks for sharing.
Sincerely Victorious
God bless
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
.this is not perfect,but it's something heartfelt. and i believe in learning,i really appreciate whe.. read more.this is not perfect,but it's something heartfelt. and i believe in learning,i really appreciate when friends bring things in my notice that i am otherwise not able to find so soon.thank you very much for your precious review dear.
Beautiful job. It is always great to read joyous poems. We may not always feel like this in our busy concret and steel realities. But poets remind us of ideals and how we wld rather be.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
My pleasure.thanks for your kind words and very inspiring review dear.
"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ)
i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects..
and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..