"You"
A Poem by
Dr Ayaz chandio
me and life will always be agreed on you....!
just wrote simply..hope you would like this friends.
Life
asked me "what is your destination"?
I replied very contentedly "you",
when I asked life” what is your
destination?"
life smilingly said "you",
thus I and life have the same destination that
is "you".
© 2012 Dr Ayaz chandio
Reviews
Very sweet
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
thanks dear.
A Nicely planed piece of writing with a deep meaning. It all makes sense.
A great write and thanks for sharing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
A Nicely planed piece of writing with a deep meaning. It all makes sense.
A great write and thanks for sharing.
11 Years Ago
My pleasure,thanks for sharing your views dear ...love and blessings.
It is nice to know that one is h=eaded in the correct direction in life..Nice write..Valentine
Posted 11 Years Ago
It is nice to know that one is h=eaded in the correct direction in life..Nice write..Valentine
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
thanks for your words dear..stay blessed.
Simple. Beautiful.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Simple. Beautiful.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
You forage beneath the daily inanities,
The dull days, the passage of vanities,
And write your creed
In the language of sanity...
Posted 11 Years Ago
You forage beneath the daily inanities,
The dull days, the passage of vanities,
And write your creed
In the language of sanity...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
blessings dear David Lewis Paget.
Cute!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Cute!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks dear.
this is great. i love the simplicity of it. wonderful!
Posted 11 Years Ago
this is great. i love the simplicity of it. wonderful!
11 Years Ago
thank you dear.
11 Years Ago
always welcome :)
Wow, I love it. Short and sweet and yet very deep and thought provoking. Great read.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Wow, I love it. Short and sweet and yet very deep and thought provoking. Great read.
11 Years Ago
You're very welcome
brilliant, absolutely brilliant
Posted 12 Years Ago
brilliant, absolutely brilliant
11 Years Ago
Thanks dear.
Brought a smile to my face. Nice write.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Brought a smile to my face. Nice write.
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Added on September 26, 2012
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Author
Dr Ayaz chandio Karachi,Sindh.
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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ)
i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects..
and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually ..
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