Chapter One

"I don't need such sister!" , " Nobody wants to play with me, because of her!" , "I want to have brother! I need brother!"

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"More than 10 years have passed from that day, has he changed? Has anything chended?" - let out sad sight and stood up from the grass, break was about to end. Time to get back to classroom.
"Hey Ariel! Wait! Do you hear me?"
He turned to see who has been calling him
" Where have you been?!"
" You know...Ai, its not important, time for lesson to start" - said approaching Ariel with stupid smile on his face the other one
"Like you care about it now?" -Ariel commented quietly
"Did you say something?"- the other asked putting his arm around Ariel's neck and leaning closer to his face with same stupid smile
" And stop hanging on me, I'm not the lamppost" - and removed the arm from his neck
"Hey, what happened?" - the other got serious
" Nothing"
The bell rang....
During lunch break the other came again...
" So, Ariel, what bugs you today?"
"Nothing" - got same cold reply
" Hmmm, today brothers not on best terms.." - someone commented quietly from another table
Ariel simply left the cafeteria.
"Hey, Ariel!"- brother called - "And why are you interfering?!"- got angry brother and run after Ariel. He catch up with him outside of the school building and grabbed his arm to stop him.
" What's going on with you to..."- tried to shout angrily, but was thrown and laying already on the ground - "Awww...That hurts! Ariel!"
" But not as much as I'm hurt "- Ariel said through teeth, his eyes were already watery, be you could see he fight hard to not let it fall.
"Ariel" - brother was surprised, he stood up at last and came closer " Do you think I have forgotten?" - said in calm sad voice - "10 years. Our mom. She passed away." - he hugged Ariel - " even if we were so little that time, and like we couldn't understand what was happening on that day, but that we won't see mom anymore, impossible to forget that feeling and that pain. Father probably until now thinks that all is fine, that we don't remember and it's only him who suffers. I'm crying too in my heart, and you as well. But if your pain is so big, cry it out, it might help.I'm here for you, Ariel."
"Alex!" - his hand clenched onto brothers sleeve as tears started flowing uncontrollably
"I'm here, with you, Always"- he hugged his brother tightly.
After some minutes, still with some tears flowing down his cheeks Ariel lifted his he'd from brother chest " Class about to start"
" Are you OK to go to class? - Alex asked wiping some tears from Ariel's face - " Your red eyes will deceive that you cried"
"Oh my!" - Ariel got embarrassed - " What do I do?"
"Let's go for a walk"- said Alex with warm light smile
"What about class?"
"Studying is not everything in life, sometimes need to relax too"- said Alex and blinked one eye.
They went to town and firstly went for ice creams.
" So, Alex, where have you been today? You have missed first period and barely made to second one, but you left earlier that usually, so how come you were late?" - Ariel start questioning his brother when then found table to sit.
" I had something to do"
" To do what?"
" I had to visit one particular person"
"Who?"
" Mother"- and grinned widely as Ariel choked on his ice creams.- " Surprised? Why? I'm visiting her every month"
Every month? I had no idea.- Ariel thought to himself
" Hey, best school students and ditching class?"- girls voice reached them.

Reviews

[SSAgnihotri]

Hey friend , a pretty nice thinking of yours ! But I would like to suggest you to put some narration like things in the between as for I think it creates some more interest in the readers , because seeing a large amount of quotations sometimes distracts the reader . Hope I helped to improve , anyways your imagination is awesome friend . SSA

[Davidgeo]

I kinda liked how there was very little narration. It's an unusual approach but I don't think it was at all a distraction.

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Interesting dialogue, but maybe some narration would help make the peice a little more descriptive... Nonetheless, I like it.