Doubting Reality

Amazing what surrounds,
Out of reach, out of sound,
It can preach without a word.
What are you?
What am i for?

If it can, why don't it let me be?
If it won't, why should i listen?
If its strong, I am weak.
Why can't it let me be?

Is it a saint in me?
Or is it the devil beneath?
Amazing and disturbing, our reality.

Reviews

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Wow. I like the gripping feel of this piece, the idea of reality may not be what it seem. Nice write. Thanks for sharing

[Aya]

Thanks for your kind review :)

[Suditi]

Amazing and disturbing, our reality.
I really like the essence of the poem. Beautifully penned.

[Aya]

thank you :)

[SAYED THANGAL]

I think it's about the Almighty , if He is in our mind, the devil wouldn't have any place in our mind.good,
sayed thangal