Mentalities

what do we stand for?

what do we live for?

and what do we make for reaching them?

Do we follow men's thought?

or do we stand alone?

Do we follow an ideal lord?

or do we vow with no moves?

create whats built on creations,

create the modern world.

no one can take the sensation of a pure heart soul. 

Author's Note

just came out now and it didn't take long, reviews?

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

I liked it. ^_^ Those are very good questions. ;) It flowed wel. Nicely done!

[Aya]

thanks a lot

[Coyote Poetry]

"what do we stand for?
what do we live for?
and what do we make for reaching them?"
You had me from the opening lines. Need kindness and love to lead in decisions of life and war. I believe change can happen. Many places create change without violence and murder. Need leaders willing to discuss problems before offering threats. A excellent poem. Made me think this evening.
Coyote

[Aya]

thank you so much

[Valentine]

This give a person a lot to think about..I have often wondered some of hte same things..Kathie

[Aya]

i'm glad that it reached to alot of people here

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Some deep questions and thoughts, makes nice poetry...

great stuff :D

[Aya]

thank you ^^

[Nithin Purple]

valuable questions of one should ask.....nicely done friend

[Aya]

thank you

[Nithin Purple]

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[scripted]

the world in mass seems to be leaning to the left... where we live life the way we want to, where wrong doing becomes normal, where God is no longer in sight. Me i
personally would rather stay to the right... where God is not a faded figure but a clear leader, where the human heart is a caring organ that pumps out love, where there is respect and acceptance all around... love the poem and the thought it brought to me, thank you for sharing. Yours truely Danielle

[Aya]

thank you so much Danielle :)

[.]

~ superbly written... that last line is so meaningful and so true that it answers all the questions... anyone with a pure heart and soul knows what to do... i always trust my inner voice... and try and do what my conscience says... anything that doesn't harm others and is beautiful is fine with me... ~ excellent poetry...

[Aya]

thanks alot :)

[.]

~ my privilege... :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

asked great questions through a greatly,excellenty,wonderfully done poem...keep writing.

[Aya]

thank you

[Devanshu Rajput]

your welcome

[junaid altaf]

well what i m getting is that u want to break the shackles of traditionalism......
and thatzsimply.........
R E B E L
WELL WRITTEN....................

[Aya]

thanks a lot

[khalid]

very nicely penned, mind provoking..i think in the third line it was better if you said and what do we make to reach them instead of and what do we make for reaching them

[Aya]

i'll keep that in mind, thanks khalid

[khalid]

welcome