Satisfaction reached

for the sake of being truthfully happy

For the ones who feel less

those who can't be impressed

are always grasping for more

and looking up for their endless desires

running fast after life that will leave them lonely

but if they dare or bare to see whats right down their feet

that's when they shall find whats way better than their shallow dreams.

a beautiful life full of love and good friendship

was waiting to be discovered 

when they saw they stopped asking for anything else.

what they have always had

what they have got

is a world's worth of accomplishments.

if all thought this way

everybody would be pleased

and satisfaction would be reached.

Author's Note

don't push life.

Reviews

[khalid]

wonderful poem but as you said (if)! it is really strange that we may be having what we need between our hands but we still dont feel it is what we really want. human being is a really greedy creature whose eyes can be filled only with dust. and as it was said, feeling satisfaction is an endless treasure but how many of us already have got this treasure?im sure only very few of us have it!
thank you for the nice poem..

[Aya]

thank you :)

[khalid]

welcome

[Neha]

Nice work. Everyone has different idea of satisfaction. It is being truly content that can give it but as khalid has pointed out, we humans are greedy enough to be content!

[Aya]

Yeah alot are, thanks for reviewing

[InsanityWriter]

Very nice. :)

[Aya]

Thanks

[marie]

great poem, could use some polishing, the way its written reminds me of a story, or someone shouting at the wind praying to be heard

[dillonjensen]

Deciding my glass was half full was the best decision I have ever made. Wonderfully written poem, and inspiring insights into the mind of a truly happy person.

[Aya]

Thanks alot

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Oh yes!!!
Happiness, peace of soul and mind....
everyone goes searching for it....usually in all the wrong places, due to a
distorted view they are made to follow....
One when can escape that trap....world opens up :)

Excellently portrayed :)

[Aya]

Thank you :)

[Tate Morgan]

A life spent searching for happiness is one true sign of a fruitless existence Contentment breeds happiness everything else is just a pleasure

[Aya]

Yes it is, thanks for reviewing :)

[DrD]

I like your philosophical works for their simplicity that somehow becomes profound. You're quite right, of course, we strive for what we don't need and lose ourselves in the process. A very ice job and an excellent read.

[Aya]

Philosophical is such a big word im pleased! Thank you

[.]

~ ah... precious words of wisdom... what a pleasure it is to read this poem... i believe in this philosophy very deeply... :)

[Aya]

thank you :)

[.]

~ you're very welcome, dudette... :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Nice. I really the message of this poem.

[Aya]

thank you