Satisfaction reached

for the sake of being truthfully happy

For the ones who feel less

those who can't be impressed

are always grasping for more

and looking up for their endless desires

running fast after life that will leave them lonely

but if they dare or bare to see whats right down their feet

that's when they shall find whats way better than their shallow dreams.

a beautiful life full of love and good friendship

was waiting to be discovered 

when they saw they stopped asking for anything else.

what they have always had

what they have got

is a world's worth of accomplishments.

if all thought this way

everybody would be pleased

and satisfaction would be reached.

Author's Note

don't push life.

Reviews

[khalid]

wonderful poem but as you said (if)! it is really strange that we may be having what we need between our hands but we still dont feel it is what we really want. human being is a really greedy creature whose eyes can be filled only with dust. and as it was said, feeling satisfaction is an endless treasure but how many of us already have got this treasure?im sure only very few of us have it!
thank you for the nice poem..

[Aya]

thank you :)

[khalid]

welcome

[SAYED THANGAL]

a positive and creative out look towards life,
sayed

[Antonio Valentino]

For the ones who feel less
those who can't be impressed

are always grasping for more

and looking up for their endless desires

running fast after life that will leave them lonely

but if they dare or bare to see whats right down their feet

that's when they shall find whats way better than their shallow dreams.


that was, wonderful!


what a great message the rest of this piece conveyed..

we just never appreciate things, until they are gone do we?

much wisdom here in this caring story, thanks for shairing it with us!

:)

[Aya]

thank you so much :)

[Dream Weaver]

We all have but one life to live...if everyone could agree on something, anything; it should be the satisfaction of peace love and togetherness. Unfortunately we are human and bound by our instincts some good and some bad...
I enjoyed the positive ending and strong writing throughout!

[Aya]

thank you

[Dream Weaver]

You're quite welcome.

[An owl on the moon]

There is a true joy that flows through your words... such brilliant words of wisdom.. of the life so many long for but never quite discover. Yes, may this be the year for a world like this, dear poet.

[Aya]

thank you :)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Sometimes when we come from a lifetime of not having, desire it feel like is all we got. Thought provoking piece here Aya, great concept. Somewhat spiritual?

[Pax]

your words has depth with philosophy my friend...
i see your beautiful soul in this write for its speaks of love and friendship...
i said to myself that our human nature is hard to please or to content always...
for we always want more... and that's our greedy nature speaking... sometimes we just have to stop and see what's we already have and reflect on it then you'll realize you already got what you always wanted... i hope that will be as easy as that...

great well expressed poem my friend.

[Aya]

thanks alot pax i apprichate it :)

[dunnia]

Wow this is beautiful and very inspiring...indeed we would all have better lives if we just looked at it this way

[Aya]

thanks alot

[highthought]

by another word .. life is not only an uncontrolled desire .. that s what you want to say .. when heart is fill with love it will not run to the wrong track ..love will fill the gaps and surely there is a joy in that ...thank you for ringing the bell

[Aya]

Thank you for understanding :)

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Great poem,Aya. I agree that we should enjoy the little details of life. Great job

[Aya]

Thanks alot cord

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many peoples do not know simple pleasure. do not know how to be busy being unbusy..

poem is good !

[Aya]

Thanks