Terrorist in Black

about the palastine case, iraq and whatever ridicule war out there.

One man One day dressed in white,
with a long beard and a fierce enemy's eyes,
Blinded as any criminal but his ambition was quite wide,
On 9/11 everybody cried.
Indeed it was terror but don't get confused,
Because whatever they wore was just a costume.

For that day other millions had to suffer,
They had to pay till the criminal was uncovered.
Even more innocent blood was spilled day by day and till this day,
Why would people make others suffer when they know those are aggrieved.

Only after i saw the departure of citizens and women' cries,
On their neck hang the keys of their destroyed lives.
That's when i realized the appalling truth in grief.
''They made the most benefit of that day'' a poor kid told me..

They decided to take whats mine in cruelly
They killed thousands of children and wives to end me.
The greed of the scene to who sees says it wise
Years of murders on TV and they still wetter on human rights..

No shame is shown, but i can't say why
They invade and coax their own
To stand for these plotted lies.
serving their country that's what nobles die for
unaware that their country is run by evil cunning terrorists in shiny suits.

Author's Note

its not a blind judgment, its a fair one.

Reviews

[DrD]

This is a bold and courageous work demonstrating the intrigues in shadowed corners that become known as diplomacy and international relations. True, no one knows the extent of the terrorism following the most famous act of terrorism (that may have not been terrorism after all) and it gets so complex that we are captured in the webs of lies and conspiracies. You lay it all out well and it screams of truth and I could not ignore it or tell you that it is anything less that excellent.

[Aya]

Thank you so much i appriciate it :)

[KatDarkness]

Love it, very courageous and controversial, well written! :)

[Aya]

thank you :)

[InsanityWriter]

Your ending is sadly true, power corrupts people on both sides and screws over everyone under them. :/ Lovely poem though.

[Aya]

Thank you

[marie]

11/9 is supposed to be 9/11, you seem pretty mad at us americans, though i can't say i agree that our gov. is still fighting a war that should have ended long ago, when we got the guy who started it all

[Aya]

Anger on the gov. Americans dont have a say in anything i guess everyone is busy with their own lives..thanks for the remark im surprized noone corrected me before thanks again :)

[marie]

yeah.... i will have a say in the choices our gov. makes at least i will when i am of voting age. as for people not having a say in anything we do... just the majority of us are to lazy to actually take that right.... those people make me sick

[Aya]

At the end i hope will come a generation that would reval on them someday, no one will have power forever

[marie]

but those who have power"nurture" the next generation. unless we find someone who is really stubborn in just the right things, then we are stuck in this slum, and stupid war

[Aya]

I guess by our latest egyptian experience you just need to talk aloud about what bothers citizens if one person said it in the right audience or gathering, in egypt it started on fb when people realized they were many with one opinion..so i guess that shall happen too in the us

[marie]

yeah... maybe i'll try but i really don't know what one fifteen year old can do...

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~ i am with you on this... some are terrorists in masks and some in perfect suits and powerful positions... i think the main problem is that these politicians in all countries manipulate and brainwash citizens... to control them... while they do their deals secretly... they just take us for a ride deceiving us all the time... it's very sad... but i have not lost hope... i think there will be a day when everyone will respect everyone's human rights... it will not happen tomorrow... but it will happen... ~ this is an excellent piece of writing... your poetic voice is very powerful and fearless...

[Aya]

My hope of that day is small but not totaly absent..thank you for reviewing :)

[.]

~ we will hope together... ~ you are very welcome... :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Wow, Amazing and powerful statement filled with strength and resolve. Very beautifully written. I really appreciated this one. Not many people have this type of courage.

[Aya]

Thank you

[Ahmad Cox]

No problem. Thank you for sharinv

[Pax]

The complexity of judgement, its blind nature, and the fabrication of some truth... This is such a powerful write that speaks in many layers of your thoughts and observation... Great write.

[Aya]

Thank you

[J. Write]

This is a full of deep thoughts. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

[Aya]

Thank you for reviewing :)

[khalid]

very nicely penned..

[Aya]

Thanks

[dunnia]

This is very nice i totally agree

[Aya]

Thanks

[dunnia]

your welcome:)