Payments for life

The denyied reality in which humans live in

As human beings wander on Earth . 

Only few made time to search for an answer ,

While the rest seek the joy of life 

Not asking how they entered or why it ends ,

their existance is out of question ,

when all they care about

Is how to conquer nature .

Roaming around on crack one was taken ,

Underground he rests or above the skys he is waiting?

Break the systems ,don"t ask questions

about who made you and created this system of life and death

But stepford lives it is no matter how they're dressed.

Still, listen to this music play,

Convinced they are free.

Reality is they became slaves of what they made.

As long as humans are eager to non-immortal matters,

Nothing is constant or worthy to last for immense years,

And still be belived.

To whom they belonged?

Not much will answer,

When the day of payments strikes.

Reviews

[khalid]

this is a really super writing, it touches belief and the theory of the purpose of human existence on earth. it sounds like voice coming from far away to awaken us. i think all human beings are related to this. only one thing i could catch in this nice poem, i know it was due to fast typing, that thing is, whom not whome..very nicely penned really...thank you for such a great poem

[Aya]

Thanks alot sorry for the delay it i have been busy..thanks again :)

[khalid]

you are welcome

[Chris]

Thoughtful in one way and judgemental in another. Humanity is a frail creation with all its flaws and weaknesses but it WAS created and we carry the hope of "better" all our days.

[dunnia]

such an amazing poem....makes you think of how people are wasting there time, very inspiring keep on writing

[Aya]

thanks :)