Payments for life

The denyied reality in which humans live in

As human beings wander on Earth . 

Only few made time to search for an answer ,

While the rest seek the joy of life 

Not asking how they entered or why it ends ,

their existance is out of question ,

when all they care about

Is how to conquer nature .

Roaming around on crack one was taken ,

Underground he rests or above the skys he is waiting?

Break the systems ,don"t ask questions

about who made you and created this system of life and death

But stepford lives it is no matter how they're dressed.

Still, listen to this music play,

Convinced they are free.

Reality is they became slaves of what they made.

As long as humans are eager to non-immortal matters,

Nothing is constant or worthy to last for immense years,

And still be belived.

To whom they belonged?

Not much will answer,

When the day of payments strikes.

Reviews

[khalid]

this is a really super writing, it touches belief and the theory of the purpose of human existence on earth. it sounds like voice coming from far away to awaken us. i think all human beings are related to this. only one thing i could catch in this nice poem, i know it was due to fast typing, that thing is, whom not whome..very nicely penned really...thank you for such a great poem

[Aya]

Thanks alot sorry for the delay it i have been busy..thanks again :)

[khalid]

you are welcome

[Renée]

You are quite a thinker ! If this piece can not make anyone think about about beliefs & how they live their lives...then they are blind ! Great subject & writing ..

[Aya]

thanks alot

[Renée]

my pleasure

[Tarry Franck]

Very thought provoking - you did a fantastic job. Love the ending :)

[Aya]

Thank you :)

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~ you are very wise, perceptive and philosophical... yes, we need to live with the consciousness of what our actions mean... we have to have some sense of ethics... some sense of right and wrong... ~ if we live without thinking and harm others and the environment, then our actions will come back to haunt us... ~ this is beautiful poetry from a sensitive poet...

[Aya]

Of coarse it would or may i say that everyone must believe that everything they do they will pay for their mistaker or rewarded for their good deeds,
thank you i appriciate your words

[.]

~ beautifully said... and, you're very welcome...

[Ahmad Cox]

Amazing deep and probing poem about the human condition. I wish that more people felt this way and we would have a much better world

[Aya]

Thanks alot

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

"When the day of payments strikes"

The ending here hits the soul hard....makes us ponder upon
what is written before and then reflect upon our own lives...

Most great deep poetry
Well done :D

[Aya]

Thank you, most appriciated :)

[Audrey Howitt]

I thought this an excellent view on the question of human existence--so very well said--

[Aya]

Thank you Audrey

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful write on the meaning of life and existence . A thought provoking piece. It reflects the questions I asked the reader in my poem " The Turf " which has a lot of philosophy on existence.
Thank you for penning.

[Aya]

Thank you sami, mostly appriciated :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. My pleasure.

[DrD]

Aya, it's difficult for me to tell you how much I enjoyed this work. More than "enjoyed" I respected these words for daring to challenge a theme that devastates humanity as it robotically watches and drowns in apathy. I could not agree with these words more, not express them better.

[Aya]

Thank you :)

[Pax]

First of i love the title... it's something more of a great reality of what life's troubles are...
Reality is they became slaves of what they made.
~ wow,powerful words peaks of truth... for i imagine that we were prisoners of our own expectation... that lead to the failures and hunting voice of imperfection...

Great write my freind...

[Aya]

Thank you so so much i really apprictiate it