One Road

was starting to write it as a poem but turned out to be a song, this is about a personal life experience.

I'm too stunned of what i see.

I never thought you would bail out on me.

I never thought what we had would be forgotten by you.

The one person in the world, i would have died for you.

I'm fool, I'm fool

How could i believe that..

everything would last till our death.

No doubt, No doubt

I was living in your games.

But now, But now

I've realized my mistakes

No love, No trust

until i get the same.

No hopes looks up

No fear of shame.

No dreams too high

I won't fall off again.

No sense,No taste of wins in my head.

No downs, No fails breaking my heart, I'll start

Look straight 

No turns, just one road i won't be lost.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I see a lot of pain here I cant tell who this about your husband boyfriend or child But one thing for sure we all suffer these pains in life .Thinking love will last forever and then it doesnt .These pains are good in one way by suffering we learn to understand the pain infidelity causes another and it makes us a better person in the next one/Now that is if this is about such a thing and not death

[Aya]

Yes it's about a former friend of mine and i'm too young for a husband or a child xD i'm glad you felt what i wrote about

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~ what a beautiful and moving song... loss and betrayal teach us precious lessons... they are heartbreaking but somehow they make us focus on the road ahead... ~ this piece of poetry will always play in my heart and remind me that i must look ahead... with courage...

[Aya]

Thanks so much and i'm glade you enjoyed it

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~ you're very welcome... :)

[InsanityWriter]

I love the lyrics. :) You really should try putting them to music, they're great! ^_^

[Aya]

Thanks :D

[Aya]

Thanks :D

[Sid]

Again a very well written poem, the pain in this is apparent though I don't quite understand who this is about a boyfriend or a friend or maybe a family member in some way, but I have to say it is very well expressed and I like the ending it's somewhat hopeful...again a great write!!

[Aya]

to me its a friend but i wrote it to go for anyone really betrayal is done by anyone you trust and all would be the same pain.
thank you

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you for sharing such a personal experience through poetry.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very groovy write which a lot of deep meanings behind it...
talented piece of writing :D

[Aya]

Thank you :)

[khalid]

a very nice self motivating poem, i think it needs a lot of self confidence to write such a poem. it reflects great understanding of yourself...

[MOON]

Poignant beautiful write of the loss of someone dear and affirming oneself to live another day so to speak.

[Chris]

Both poem and song tell of a hard path followed and its broken dreams... I find I wonder what tune wound behind your eyes.

[zainul]

Expressed your feelings very eloquently.
It shows your determination to pursue just one road so that you won't be lost.
Wonderful work.