Dead end Love. (How she changed)

We love those who don’t love us, still hoping for their love that will never come.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I once knew a gel and how she changed-

Not her clothes or her shoes

But her mind,

Her feelings about the way she loved-me

 

At least I thought she did

And now her phone just rings and rings

Onion rings tears her silence brings

Her phone just rings and rings-

No answer just my heart full of questions.

Author's Note

Can't decide about the title, any suggestions will be appreciated.

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is absoutely wonderful! Keep up the good work :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Its so sad and nice...pain of love always exists in the world..why we search for it?? if she could change to you, so you could change too! :)
Let your phone ring and ring and sing...
~nia~

[s.r.knight]

Very well written.
The picture made me laugh at first glance (which probably wasn't your intention but still...)

This is a lovely piece.

[Richy Moon]

Hmmm.... Very well written, it shows how temperary love can be. They say love lasts forever.... Not all the time!
Personaly, i think that How she changed fits better w/ poem. But of course the writer knows best :)

[Southern Cross]

Perfect picture.. It's our heart's unanswered questions that won't let the mind rest. The title will come to you ..give it time and so will the desire to have the questions answered.

[MOON]

Like this Ayanda , perfectly told nobody at the end of the line.

I would agree with eatmills. It is an awesome poem. I believe and have always said if you write it from the heart it is the best thing ever.

[eatmills]

Uhmm... Yeah ... sorry about that :)

[eatmills]

Ayanda, DUDE THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LEAVE THE TITLE AS IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!