Simple  life of Child

Simple life of Child

A Poem by Ayanda Mteto

I remember as child, life was easy

Teaching only A, B, C

Appreciating the best that came,

Toys I played ‘till my feet were as brown like the ground

Restless in my imagination, full with adventures

Pirates that search for treasure,

Sailing the angry sea, one eye patched  

Bevy beard covering the face, with a grin showing stained teeth

Gold as the treasure, the X we seek,

 

I played until the sun was swallowed by the sea

Not troubled about the world,

Serving dinner cold, to the hungry mouths without kitchen to warm

Without dreams, to dream

Died in the morning as they went to work

Tireless labours, busy bees working for money, not honey

Lost the sweetness to life,

 

A grown up child without ambition to life

Without fun and joy that fly a spirit aloft.  

© 2012 Ayanda Mteto


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This is so true. It's so sad that as we grow up, so many of us loose that joy and innocence. Excellent poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good poem. The best years of our life innocent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good poem I would have to agree that in life being a child is easy. As we grow older things get harder.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You have a lovely way with words and theres a naivety to your peom that i like i dont kow if ts intentional or not, either way it allows that only one side of the story is told. We all know life isnt like that but maybe thats just my experience talking. Good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


the first line I really liked, it speaks so much truth

Posted 12 Years Ago


We are not happy with our lives, because we lost the childhood fun we used to play. reviews are appreciated.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 10, 2012
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Ayanda Mteto
Ayanda Mteto

Durban, I am a free spirit, i dont belong to a system., South Africa



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I love to write alot, mostly poems. I have a passion for drawing, I love mystries, that enigmatic scent with contradictions, I am a simple guy encapsulated with all the complication left most trouble.. more..

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