A girl I Love

love is a gift to be shared with the on you love.

She is just a girl I love

I gaze upon her face

Bathe in beauty

Surreal in a sensual mouthful taste

I kiss her lips

 

Sweet and tender

Like a marshmallow dip on a honey jar

Full with dripping nectar

Buzzing her emotions she open bare

 

Holding me in her caress

Tingling tremulously down my spine

Across my body swiftly taken

By the pleasure of her soul.

Reviews

[Richy Moon]

A beautiful love poem for sure. It's crystal clear the voice in this poem is deeply in love with this girl. I like it :)

[Southern Cross]

Beautiful flow or words ..Romantic with a soft touch of erotic..nicely done

[eatmills]

Very nice. A very spiritual ending.

[MOON]

Beautiful write good flow and heartfelt.

[Poppie Mira]

wow,so sweet!

[Ayanda Mteto]

thanx:-)