Tear Drops in Your Palm

Of all the times I've shed tears over you,
Of all the Times You did nothing about it.
I've come to see Just how much you really care.
You've stitched together and torn apart my heart
Again And again.
My eyes for you have shattered.
My heart is worn and tattered.
My soul is weak and old.
But my love for you remains pure as gold.
I've kept my head in skies,
Just to see your star filled eyes.
But the clouds always remind me,
That your the only one,
Who makes me cry.
And that your the only one,
Who holds all of my
tear drops in your Palm.

Reviews

[Neon]

I hate watching beautiful "Aya' being cried out. Your tears're special which make you even special for hearts. Don't cry... just smile.

Some lines in this write're profoundly pen'd up... with the rhythmic flow of your melodic emotions which bounced upon the hearts of your lovers. Nice concept, you've put your efforts in this write. Great job! ;)

[A. Amos]

Adore your writing simply elegant and neatly crafted, felt your soul and heart in your words...

[Honey-Bee]

Lovely! I especially like the last line. And that your the only one, who holds all of my tear drops in your Palm. I like this line to You've stitched together and torn apart my heart Again and again.