I Love The Way...

I Love The Way...

A Poem by Aya Blue

I love the way you smile,
It's like it was meant for only me.
I love the way you speak,
Your way with words sets me free.
You comfort me and love me,
Even though this life is hard.
It's good to know you'd catch me if I fall.
I love everything about you,
From your head to your toes.
You mean everything to me.
I love you more than you know.
The Way you smirk,
The Way you laugh.
You don't know,
But it makes my heart beat fast.
Your personality,
Your charm,
Makes me feel like,
You'd never cause me any harm.
In your strong arms,
When you hold me close.
I know that you'll protect me.
I know you love me most.
And the end of the day,
When it's all said and done.
You'll say " i love you",
And I'll know it's your heart,
That I've won.

© 2013 Aya Blue


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Ha! Very nice poem, very-very brilliant poem.

First off, I wanna say, I hope he knows how lucky he's to be dating you and of course spending some time with you to keep you safe and making ya ever smiley throughout the days.

Here, I enjoyed and loved your all lines and words, but here's few lines that I loved the most, Have a look below :-)

"I love the way you speak,
Your way with words sets me free."

What the beautiful lines! Yeah! It shows that how you love him and how your feelings, your heart just beats for him. His voice works to you as same as a cold wind that blows your beautiful and fragrance hair and his arms here work for you as same as the arms of flowers and his chest works to you as same as the place of heaven where when you hug him you get yourself lost from yourself ..from this world to the world of 'Angels'.. to the world of 'Birds' and of course to the place of peace where one soul spends some time with other to let the two heart go to be one :)

And .. your ending is 'Amazing and so Marvelous'

When it's all said and done.
You'll say " i love you",
And I'll know it's your heart,
That I've won.

Ha! This stanza really made me laugh my dearest, Aya!
Yes, I think he's a very luckiest guy whose heart you've won :)

May you both folks stay ever happy and happy :)

(OMG, Wait a minute!
The luckiest guy has won the heart of an angel.. WOW!
Oh No!
Holy-Crap!

I missed the chance to have an angel's heart
Ah! My Bad!)

Haha!
"(Joke)"

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love is unexplainable and you touch the definition here with confidence. Good write, young writer.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wrote this for my sister.. she didn't know what to put in her lovers Christmas card!:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Neon

10 Years Ago

Oh I C, that's so sweet of you now. It means, there's two beautiful angels living in this world to m.. read more
Ha! Very nice poem, very-very brilliant poem.

First off, I wanna say, I hope he knows how lucky he's to be dating you and of course spending some time with you to keep you safe and making ya ever smiley throughout the days.

Here, I enjoyed and loved your all lines and words, but here's few lines that I loved the most, Have a look below :-)

"I love the way you speak,
Your way with words sets me free."

What the beautiful lines! Yeah! It shows that how you love him and how your feelings, your heart just beats for him. His voice works to you as same as a cold wind that blows your beautiful and fragrance hair and his arms here work for you as same as the arms of flowers and his chest works to you as same as the place of heaven where when you hug him you get yourself lost from yourself ..from this world to the world of 'Angels'.. to the world of 'Birds' and of course to the place of peace where one soul spends some time with other to let the two heart go to be one :)

And .. your ending is 'Amazing and so Marvelous'

When it's all said and done.
You'll say " i love you",
And I'll know it's your heart,
That I've won.

Ha! This stanza really made me laugh my dearest, Aya!
Yes, I think he's a very luckiest guy whose heart you've won :)

May you both folks stay ever happy and happy :)

(OMG, Wait a minute!
The luckiest guy has won the heart of an angel.. WOW!
Oh No!
Holy-Crap!

I missed the chance to have an angel's heart
Ah! My Bad!)

Haha!
"(Joke)"

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful poem where you have expressed your feelings so well. I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A splendid write about the feelings of you about a person who you really love.
Very eloquent,heartfelt and innocent write.
Love it.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aya Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you!:)
zainul

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome.:)
Keep the lovely spirit,young poet.:)

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Aya Blue
Aya Blue

lakeland, FL



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