Boy With Brilliant Brown Eyes

Boy with brilliant brown eyes

Living in a world with the lowest of highs 

Music serving as the only life line

A smile does not always mean you are fine

So afraid of being forgotten he cuts all ties

Author's Note

To Noah.

Reviews

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

theres ropes you can hold on to, but how tight can your hands hold until your grip wants to let loose? We cant really hold on, but letting go feels so much better

[Stan Lee]

Sounds romantic :) reminded me of that movie high strung.

[gracendrpressure]

I didn't cut this tie.

but you did

[gracendrpressure]

Subdivisions by Rush
Losing It by Rush
Different Strings by Rush
The Killing Moon by Echo and the Bunnymen

[TheLovelessOne]

It really is short and to the point, I hope this kid reconnects with you if I read the last line correctly.

[Natalie Aidyn]

He Hurt Me. I Loved Him And He Destroyed Me.

[TheLovelessOne]

Want to talk?

[gracendrpressure]

finally free
by dream theater

[Karmee]

love those last two lines,
I agree short & to the point, nicely written

[revalatia]

short and right to the point... flows nicely.. :)