Summer Dawn
A Poem by Jon
This is another free-style piece - I rarely write free-styles. I prefer structure, but this turned out great! :)
Cascading rays of a golden, summer dawn Stir life to awaken once more; The peace of the starry arboretum Wanes like Luna's wrinkled face To rising sun above the forest and meadow, Melting, the cool mist into the purity of Dew that blankets flowers like gems And spider-webs into glistening crystals.
© 2012 Jon
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Author's Note
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I wrote this to honor Summer days when the sun is out - reminds me of Enya's 'Deora Ar Mo Chroi'. I saw all that I described on such a morning, and I had to write about it. It is quite rare in the Northeast that we ever get much sun in summer. Usually it is rain - lots and lots of rain. Rain is fine, but after a while, it just slows you down. We've had too much rain lately, and this poem reminds me of that time in July when the sun came out from behind the clouds.
So, it is a bit short, but has a nice meter to it, a sort of flow that I usually don't add to my works, but it worked well here :) . It is filled with imagery, metaphor, and a dash of simile. I hope you enjoyed it, and I hope that it fills your days with light and comfort, when all other lights seem to go out.
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Added on March 8, 2012
Last Updated on March 8, 2012
Author
JonCalas Galam, CT
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*sigh* Where should I begin...
I mostly write Poetry, though for the moment I am working on a fantasy epic which I hope to get published by next year.
But back to Poetry:
I became fascinated throu.. more..
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