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Here it comes
an instantaneous release
all the tears that won’t fall
undecibelled screams will remain
just that
amass in that one rose bud

drip

draw

another paper-cut
to join the clique
skin unsewn but meshed like net
providence to fuckedupness
psychological mistake

stripped

raw

neck hairs stand on end
there it goes
malfunctioned Malaprop
tiny rivulet of all that’s bad
and then comes more guilt

ripped

floor

small faux pas
forgotten
thrombin
already clotting.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I had to read a few times. Words are strong and you create a wild vision with your short and strong statements. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Richard Williams]

A very sharp poem, cutting the conscious with skillful combinations, such as "undecibelled screams", and direct display of fine assonance with "small faux pas". Very nice.

[M Garcia]

This is really good. I thought that having it all together like that would distract from it, but it works.

[L]

fuckedupness -- - growing on me...

but

malfunctioned Malaprop

kicks some serious a*s. Like this one a lot Shan

[OT]

hehe "fuckedupness" - word of the day! lol - love your word choices here - "undecibelled" - "malfunctioned Malaprop
tiny rivulet of all that’s bad" - this is a great write!! nice!

[Ruth]

And exorcised..it seethes on its own, discarded..wow! This holds so much claustrophobic tension..wonderful hon..have missed your work! xx