Detail

Detail

A Poem by Awdures
"

It's where the devil is

"
I let my finger follow the curve of your lip,
That bow, cupid arched for me, the pout
of the small bridge of your lips,
with which you smile and make laughter.
The small pink buds that make me tingle
when your voice escapes them.
I've studied their art, long and hard;
small lines at their edges in deep
happy creases,
The warmth of the thin skin on mine,
the tenderness of their angles.
-----
I follow up to your eyes,
Again following the shallow lines that form,
and small shadows from your endeavours.
I am mesmerised by the deep chocolate warmth
smiling as you look at me with the same intrigue
Looking at the kaleidoscope of patterns that swallow me
whole, and hypnotise me to them.
They envelope me, caress me without touching
Such sensitivity; rare in most, apparent in those eyes.
------
Under my fingers, the smoothness
and finesse of your skin,
warm against my coolness
reciprocating my touch with it's goose flesh
small hairs raising to my touch as I explore
wanting to know more.

© 2010 Awdures


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A very nice detailed sensual poem Awdures. I can hear an infatuation in your words: That bow, cupid arched for me, the pout of the small bridge of your lips.
It all plays out like a discovery at every turn, not wanting to stop till all is discovered. Nice!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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a very sensually creative piece of poetry...
the descriptive imagery is wonderful...
i really love this poem...;-)
"I follow up to your eyes,
Again following the shallow lines that form,
and small shadows from your endeavors"---great line...;-)


Posted 14 Years Ago


A very nice detailed sensual poem Awdures. I can hear an infatuation in your words: That bow, cupid arched for me, the pout of the small bridge of your lips.
It all plays out like a discovery at every turn, not wanting to stop till all is discovered. Nice!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Awdures
Awdures

Bangor, Wales, United Kingdom



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