If I could see you again ....

If I could see you again ....

A Poem by The Green Mountaineer
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Just a wish of a broken heart ...

"
I want to see
The face
That lights a thousand nights
That kiss
That I can't live without
Because I might
Miss you so much
That my life is emptiness

I miss
Every little thing
That you've brought in to pull me out
Of the hole my whole world has been
If I could see you again

I might not have to feel
Like everything's crashing down
You're all I want
Even if you can't begin to believe
That my love is real
And life without you
Is so meaningless
It's a mess
Music without the sound
Chaos, loss, destruction
From the moment of introduction
You've been the one
That my every breath revolves around

I wish that you felt the way I do
That you could understand
That every second I'm with you
Is more than a rush
More than a moment
Caught up so much in such
Hopeless, falling confusion
And I'm so scared
Because I know I might come to lose it

I sometimes forget
I sometimes don't see
That just living as one half of me
Is not enough
It's so much less
There's too much of
Misery and unattainable thoughts of happiness

If I could see you again
I'd be myself
I'd let go
Of all that's been seeming
Like there's nothing left
You're my rock that holds me up
The mountain peak
The strength to catch me
When I am weak

I'm alone right now
Holding on
Hoping that all we've built
Isn't washed away and gone
You're my everything
Literally, my dreams come true
And I'm so sorry
If I haven't treated you
Like my forever
Doesn't include you, too
If I felt like maybe I could win
I'd fight for us
And if I could see you again
I'd make you see
That with me
You could have all you'd ever need
But I'm not sure you
Want to see me again
But I'll dream...
That if I could see you again...

© 2014 The Green Mountaineer


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This is such a beautiful plaint of remembrance and regret and a wish to recapture what seemingly has been lost. There is a measure of gain even in the loss, however, as the one you love has left a marked impression on you forever. I live on the other side of this poem, with the same ache in my bones. If he came forward with such words of decree, I think my heart would burst forth into a kaleidoscope of color bright enough to create a whole other universe.

This is beautifully rendered throughout.

Congratulations! :-)



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is such a beautiful plaint of remembrance and regret and a wish to recapture what seemingly has been lost. There is a measure of gain even in the loss, however, as the one you love has left a marked impression on you forever. I live on the other side of this poem, with the same ache in my bones. If he came forward with such words of decree, I think my heart would burst forth into a kaleidoscope of color bright enough to create a whole other universe.

This is beautifully rendered throughout.

Congratulations! :-)



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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