I just want

I just want

A Poem by Nella
"

I haven't been here for a while and I think I lost my touch but I tried.

"
Put the headphones on your ears,
Just so you can remove all your fears,
Never felt so sad, all the tears,
Alone in an empty room with empty chairs,
Outside are the metaphorical bears,
Wearing thin, thin layers,
Trying to understand these words, my brain's gears
Never felt so confused, couldn't climb up the stairs,
I just want you to love me..

I don't know if you could see,
But my eyes beg for you to love me,
I don't say it because I think you hate me,
All I'm trying to do is forget how you look in that tee,
Or just forget you all together, I plead.
All these memories are just under lock and key,
Unbreakable as it may seem,
There is a fee,
I just want to forget you..

Is it too muck ask,
For you to ignore my hideous mask?
So just once you bask,
In the beauty without think it as a task,
I just want...
I just want for you to be with me forever,
And we would fall out of love, never,
If only we were together,
I just wish you knew me better..
I just want..you..

© 2013 Nella


Author's Note

Nella
Please, I'd like for you to tell me what you think and help correct my wrongs.

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I like it, but the rhyme seems a little forced. Don't be afraid to venture into a little free-verse! ;) Overall, you did a good job. (: Keep writing!!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Nella
Nella

St. john, Leeward islands, Antigua and Barbuda



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