It Stopped

I would really appreciate some reviews

    Tick tock, Tick tock, she watched the clock approach midnight with the resignation that her time was almost up. Midnight struck with a terrible gust of wind and all that could be heard was her scream as her heart was ripped out of her chest in a final act of torture, it was over... her heart stopped. 

Reviews

[InkStain]

Interesting short piece. It is a cliff hanger but seems more like a writing prompt. Good idea though. This could be a great story if you just add more.

[Avia]

I wrote it for a two sentence short story contest. I haven't thought it has potential, maybe I'll look into writing more. Thanks.